Feedback for classmates
Jong during class today presented his website and blog to show where is he now which work did he do so far. The idea of major project reflects his progression route. A very good combination of art and shoes, very creative. The process is presented in detail. I would recommend more commentary and research.
Justyna presented a lot of research followed by a good development of the idea. The digital process very detailed different tries with different colours. More commentary needed, explanation of the tools which were used.
Tracy presented a lot of research and designs which inspire he, the process of making is detailed and clear variation of different models. More commentary should be added and more practice to move the project forward.
Dawoon has a creative idea for her major project, she is inspired by impressionists of past, she represents a very good range of patterns that she is going to use. In my view, Dawoon should add more information about why did she choose particular artists.
George. Major project plan is good, the idea is very expressive and can be presented in a very interesting way. He is trying to show the moves in a dance. Has a lot to work on, no finished or started pieces. Much more research needed to make this project look finished professionally.
Inji is making a combination of medicine and art, the research and the starting process is presented clearly. More commentary on work is recommended and inspiration should be explained so the message that she is trying to send was understandable.
Jihee shows her progression route, which is footwear. The research is good, she puts a lot of effort into this project, reviewing different pattern and shaped of shoes and clothes to find the inspiration. the process of making models is shown clearly. Think about the materials that will be used.
Veronica has a very creative idea, the sketches are very beautiful, she is basing on the creatures of myths to make her collection of shoes. She presented great process of sketching and various creatures and patterns, however, I personally would like to know how she came up with this idea.
Mo shows good research and the patterns she would like to use. Reflects her progression route, good start on photoshop, more commentary needed.
Parneet has a clear idea of what she is going to do process and practice shown in detail, artists research that she is inspired by is reflected on the blog, recommend more commentary and more details about the shaped and objects the patterns are going to be applied to.
Justyna presented a lot of research followed by a good development of the idea. The digital process very detailed different tries with different colours. More commentary needed, explanation of the tools which were used.
Tracy presented a lot of research and designs which inspire he, the process of making is detailed and clear variation of different models. More commentary should be added and more practice to move the project forward.
Dawoon has a creative idea for her major project, she is inspired by impressionists of past, she represents a very good range of patterns that she is going to use. In my view, Dawoon should add more information about why did she choose particular artists.
George. Major project plan is good, the idea is very expressive and can be presented in a very interesting way. He is trying to show the moves in a dance. Has a lot to work on, no finished or started pieces. Much more research needed to make this project look finished professionally.
Inji is making a combination of medicine and art, the research and the starting process is presented clearly. More commentary on work is recommended and inspiration should be explained so the message that she is trying to send was understandable.
Jihee shows her progression route, which is footwear. The research is good, she puts a lot of effort into this project, reviewing different pattern and shaped of shoes and clothes to find the inspiration. the process of making models is shown clearly. Think about the materials that will be used.
Veronica has a very creative idea, the sketches are very beautiful, she is basing on the creatures of myths to make her collection of shoes. She presented great process of sketching and various creatures and patterns, however, I personally would like to know how she came up with this idea.
Mo shows good research and the patterns she would like to use. Reflects her progression route, good start on photoshop, more commentary needed.
Parneet has a clear idea of what she is going to do process and practice shown in detail, artists research that she is inspired by is reflected on the blog, recommend more commentary and more details about the shaped and objects the patterns are going to be applied to.
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